I really enjoyed this. Passionate, articulate. Bringing up an issue that is relevant.

Well done!

Your tags need a bit of work – could have put ‘Mohawk’ and ‘College’ in there as well as ‘Richard’ , ‘Giles’, and ‘Newspaper’ – don’t forget to add tags to your blog post as well ok?

Overall though great job Jon.

8/9

Good to see your new post up.

Nice work linking to the videos that better explain what you’re discussing. That’s helpful to readers who may not know what ‘Web 2.0′ is.

I am a bit disappointed that you didn’t take the time to dig into the topic a bit more and challenge your own initial assumptions. It is interesting to learn that you had a difficult time and that you don’t see the point, but the best stories are always the ones where the main characters closely examine their position and have a change of heart halfway through.

In your post you posit the question: But when is it too much?

I would reply that when it comes to learning, there is never ‘too much’.

Good post!

6/8

Roz

Good work on the Social Networking assignment. I think you’re better technically than you give yourself credit for!

Only thing:

-you didn’t add a del.icio.us link. Feel free to add it with your other links if the widget is giving you hassle.
-You didn’t bookmark anything through del.icio.us!

Good work though!

6.5/9

Roz

Yes all the Ledger coverage was a bit much hey?

Good work here. I can definitely hear your voice coming through. Good conversational style!

A few comments:

-In order to keep your blog posts interesting for your reader, so they don’t just seem like a ‘rant’, try presenting a well rounded view of the issue. Compare coverage on a few stations. Dig a bit deeper into our celeb obsessed culture. Try to keep it relevant in a larger way.

-Always spell check. Easiest mark you’ll ever get!

Well done. Looking forward to the next one!

8/10

Roz

Nice work.

Cheers,

Roz